Friday, January 14, 2011

Thursday Think Tank; Random deviations; In by devilounet


When the picture presented itself
I was a little shocked
Why is this chick In the bathtub?
This is a load of crock.

At first I thought this was porno
But then I saw her clothes
Was this some sort of fetish?
Only You-Know-Who knows.

I could make up Any Story
About this chick In the tub
Her sittIng there cross legged
With hope the tub is scrubbed

ANY STORY #1

“Welcome to my bathroom
Come sit Inside my tub
I’ll take a funny picture”
Says the weird guy with the chubb

OR – ANY STORY #2

My bathtub is my sanctuary
I come here to relax
I like the feel of the porcelIn
AgaInst my achIng back

HOW ABOUT…ANY STORY #3

Sometimes I light the candles
To meditate In peace
It’s quiet In the bathtub
While I contemplate my feet

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Goodbye Little Miss Chicky
SittIng Cross legged In the tub
I don’t know what your story is
Have a nice day my love.
© Sherry Irvine – January 14, 2011
THURSDAY THINK TANK:  CREDIT:  In by devilounet

5 comments:

  1. well done! you had a difficult subject to work with, but you pulled it off :)

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  2. you are quite creative.
    well penned.
    keep smiling.

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  3. Sherry,
    I loved your light hearted approach poetically, to the image you had to write about.
    Indeed an image to ponder and you have done this so well!
    Good to meet you via Poets United...

    Eileen

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  4. Very creative..
    A very nice read indeed.. Thank you for sharing this.. :)

    I sincerely invite you to join our 18th potluck beginning this Sunday, Hope to see you at Http://www.jinglepoetry.blogspot.com/
    Week 18 Theme: Languages, Signs and Symbol. Poets , especially First Time Participants are also welcome to share old poems or poems unrelated to our theme..
    Let me know if you have questions…hope to see you in… Your participation delights us, keep writing, and keep sharpening your talent … xoxox

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  5. Sherry
    This is awesome! I am very impressed with your writing and vision.

    Tracy

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